Figurative Language

Below is the poem 'I know why the caged bird sings' by Maya Angelou

A free bird leaps on the back
Of the wind and floats downstream
Till the current ends and dips his wing
In the orange suns rays
And dares to claim the sky.

But a BIRD that stalks down his narrow cage
Can seldom see through his bars of rage
His wings are clipped and his feet are tied
So he opens his throat to sing.

The caged bird sings with a fearful trill
Of things unknown but longed for still
And his tune is heard on the distant hill for
The caged bird sings of freedom.

The free bird thinks of another breeze
And the trade winds soft through
The sighing trees
And the fat worms waiting on a dawn-bright
Lawn and he names the sky his own.

But a caged BIRD stands on the grave of dreams
His shadow shouts on a nightmare scream
His wings are clipped and his feet are tied
So he opens his throat to sing.

The caged bird sings with
A fearful trill of things unknown
But longed for still and his
Tune is heard on the distant hill
For the caged bird sings of freedom.
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Q1: In the first verse, there is presence of personification and hyperbole. The poet illustrates the wind to be smooth flowing and the free bird filled with boldness and courage. The emotions of the free bird is significantly exaggerated when the poet indicated that it dares to claim the sky. This effect is to express the carefree of the bird. The second verse compares the free bird with a caged bird; the latter being restricted in agony. There is personification and metaphor. The anger accumulated in the caged bird was overbearing and how he longed himself to be freed and let its wings soar in the sky. His singing are actually the moaning of his pain. Through the third and fourth verses, the poet continues to widen the difference of the two kinds of birds. The caged, about to lose its sanity and patience, sings out loud with a trace of fear and determination; whereas the free bird continues to enjoy its freedom and is quietly searching for its preys when the sun rose. At the fifth verse, hyperbole is mostly seen. the caged bird could not tolerate anymore, he wanted to be freed. All the anger and pain will erupt any moment. But the truth is, his fate is sealed. This is his destiny. Through the defiance, every thing remained in its state. This is eminent in the last verse, where the caged bird slowly begin the succumb and finally, loses hope.

Q2: I like this poem as it strongly expresses the difference in personalities and destinies. This poem also shows how the weaker ones or people at a disadvantage strongly fight back for the lives they want. The spirit and will is totally overwhelming. However, the poet ended this poem with a sad ending. I think this is rather real, as sometimes fate is really sealed. What is yours is yours; you can't possibly change. This also gives as an inspiration that no matter what, we must always try. The results may vary with the condition of trying. The caged bird will never know whether it can escape, unless it tries. Trying is important, very important...

4 Response to "Figurative Language"

  1. Jason Erik Lundberg says:
    June 29, 2009 at 5:51 PM

    Very nice, Kai Ying. But think about the symbolism a bit more, and the fact that Maya Angelou is an African-American poet; what might the caged bird represent?

  2. Xiangjie says:
    June 30, 2009 at 8:12 AM

    I think that the caged bird refers to all the Africans-Americans in America, having to deal with racial differences by the whites, and longing for freedom. I assume that this poem was written during the period whereby the African-Americans were capture for slavery, like a caged bird unable to fly freely. The personification here is between the African-American slaves and the caged bird, both without freedom.

  3. Anonymous Says:
    June 30, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    Ooo... Mr Lundberg, I think Maya is the ancestor of Obama as they probably share the same bloodhood... :-)

  4. Anonymous Says:
    June 30, 2009 at 11:03 PM

    and Mr. Anonymous is requesting Xiangjie not to be so 'extra'. Mr Lundberg is not directing the question to you.... ELLETADING!!!! At least you could direct the answer back to Mr Lundberg as a reference for Kai Ying!!!!!